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Forever To Go by ~wildhysteria:iconwildhysteria:

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A futile dream
Dying in disgrace
Melting away our memories
Like the tears on my face

A fickle thought
Laying in my heart
How I wish she beats again
Like she used to in the start

Seems like it’s holding us back
Seems it wishes to not grow
Guess we have a lot of work
Guess we still have forever to go

A frozen moment
Resting in my hand
But the courage to thaw it
Is not in my command

A fragile hope
Floating in my eyes
Praying to reach you
So you’ll forgive my lies

Seems like I’m holding us back
Seems like I wish to not grow
Guess I have a lot of work
Guess I still have forever to go

A lifeless friendship
Existing no more
And no matter what they say
It can’t survive anymore

Seems that for you
               To accept my apology
I still have

                        Forever      to     go
©2008-2009 ~wildhysteria
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Hmm, a poem.
Based on real experiences in fact... I still have forever to go, but I will keep waiting and hoping.

In the meantime, I hope you like it ^_^
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~mangocheesecake:iconmangocheesecake: Jun 8, 2008, 1:50:10 PM
It's like... song lyrics... really good song lyrics!

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PROCRASTINATORS UNITE!

...tomorrow.

BOB BRYAR = LOVE + THE SEX.

ALSO, MINE.
~darrya:icondarrya: Jun 9, 2008, 12:03:33 AM
Hope is the last one to fade away. Nice poem, good job in capturing "forever" in the ideas.

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Dark shadows sitting on my eyes
In a glimpse of the future I realize
That all the life went in a chase
Nothing came out from this race…
~CydonianKnight:iconCydonianKnight: Jun 9, 2008, 12:59:01 AM
I very much like the repeated verses, and of course, you rhyming flows with ease. How do you do it! Simply stunning and amazing, excellent work, as always! :+fav:

P.S things will get better! KEEP CALLING GOD DAMIT! lol

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0nw4rdz(!)
~chao0:iconchao0: Jun 9, 2008, 9:02:50 AM
:wow:

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what is Billie Joe secret for looking so young

Billie "handsome pills"
Mike "That and lots of surgery"

:lol:
~wildhysteria:iconwildhysteria: Jun 11, 2008, 10:06:22 AM
:aww: Thanks, i hope that's a good thing?

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Hopelessly, I love you Endlessly
Hopelessly, I'll give you Everything

:: [link] :: [link] ::
My drawings of Matt Bellamy
~wildhysteria:iconwildhysteria: Jun 11, 2008, 10:08:48 AM
I have no idea, I just like to rhyme :aww: Thank you of course, you know I was writing this whilst talking to you... multi-tasking must be a good thing for me :lmao: You is far too kind and generous in your comment and with the faves! :hug:

I know... I know...... but I'm not sure I want to anymore.

--
Hopelessly, I love you Endlessly
Hopelessly, I'll give you Everything

:: [link] :: [link] ::
My drawings of Matt Bellamy
~wildhysteria:iconwildhysteria: Jun 11, 2008, 10:09:34 AM
Thank you very much, Hope was the last one to leave Pandora's Box, which is probably why it's the last one to fade away ^_^

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Hopelessly, I love you Endlessly
Hopelessly, I'll give you Everything

:: [link] :: [link] ::
My drawings of Matt Bellamy
~wildhysteria:iconwildhysteria: Jun 11, 2008, 10:11:15 AM
:D Thanks! I've never thought about writing just lyrics, i'd prefer to have the music first and then write to that.

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Hopelessly, I love you Endlessly
Hopelessly, I'll give you Everything

:: [link] :: [link] ::
My drawings of Matt Bellamy
~mangocheesecake:iconmangocheesecake: Jun 11, 2008, 10:14:48 AM
Whenever I start with music I always just epicly fail. And can't fit lyrics.

--
PROCRASTINATORS UNITE!

...tomorrow.

BOB BRYAR = LOVE + THE SEX.

ALSO, MINE.
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